Saturday 8 May 2010

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Film Noir Full script

INT. BEN’S BEDROOM. BED’S HOUSE. MORNING
The room is dark as the curtains are closed on the large window that takes up the whole of the central wall. Clothes lay strewn across the floor; coins, cigarettes and their packets litter the side of a large desk to the left side of the room. To the right, against the wall is a single bed with two inhabitants sleeping under the duvet. One is a boy in his late teens named BEN, his head leans against the head of a girl of a similar age named KIRA.
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INT. BEN’S BEDROOM. BED’S HOUSE. MORNING
BEN wakes up, he rubs his eyes wearily and slowly gets out of bed, walks over to the window and opens the curtains. Sunlight floods the room.CUT TO:
INT. BEN’S BEDROOM. BED’S HOUSE. MORNING
Upon the desk is a mirror which Ben looks into sleepily, he realises that he has blood on his face and proceeds to rub it off, but it doesn’t.
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BEN realises that the blood is not his. He is shocked and turns to look at KIRA.
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BEN anxiously walks over to KIRA in the bed who still hasn’t moved. She appears to be fine so he rolls her over so that he can see the right side of her body.
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INT. BEN’S BEDROOM. BED’S HOUSE. MORNING
The right side of her face is covered with a large bruise to her eye and cheek, and her lip is cut and laced with dried blood.
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BEN looks indifferent and suspiciously walks over to the window and closes the curtains. He then starts to pace up and down the length of the room repeatedly. His voice over starts whilst he is pacing.BEN(Voiceover)What a stupid bitch! I fucking new something like this would happen. How did she even end up in my bed?! I told her no a million times. No one even wanted her here anyway. Looks like we got what we wanted.
FADE TO FLASHBACK:INT. BED’S HOUSE. STAIRS. FLASHBACK OF THE NIGHT BEFOREBEN walks down the stairs. AMY sits on the right side of the stairs, mid way down. she looks ill. Ben taps her caringly on the head.
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INT. BED’S HOUSE. LOUNGE. FLASHBACK OF THE NIGHT BEFOREBEN sees AMY and KIRA sit on a sofa next to each other. KIRA pours a shot.
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INT. BED’S HOUSE. LOUNGE. FLASHBACK OF THE NIGHT BEFOREOn the left side of the room is another sofa. BEN sees CAMERON and EMILY sit on it with their legs entwined, flirting.
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INT. BED’S HOUSE. LOUNGE. FLASHBACK OF THE NIGHT BEFOREKIRA comes up to BEN drunkenly clutching a bottle of vodka.KIRA(Inebriated)Hey babe, you look so good tonight! Do you wanna dance or something?BEN(Disgustedly)You’ve had too much to drink!KIRA(Frenzied)Too much?! Not enough! I mean just…AMY appears in front of BEN and shoves KIRA hard out of the way bitchily. AMY looks directly at BEN.AMY(Smugly)Come dance with me!
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INT. BEN’S BEDROOM. BED’S HOUSE. MORNING – PRESENT DAYBEN walks over to the desk and picks up one of the cigarette packs, gets out a cigarette and then sits on the edge of the bed. Meanwhile KIRA’S voice is heard as a voiceover.KIRA(Echoed and overlapping)What have you done to me? I feel so alone. I just wanted a friend. You hurt me.
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INT. BEN’S BEDROOM. BED’S HOUSE. MORNING – PRESENT DAYBEN sits on the edge of the bed with a cigarette in his mouth.BEN(Voiceover, concerned)My god, what the hell am I going to do? I barely remember a thing! Anyone could have done this – even me…He searches for a lighter – patting down his pockets and looking around – but doesn’t find one so he takes it out of his mouth. He rubs his neck tensely then stares pensively into the air.
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INT. BED’S HOUSE. LOUNGE. FLASHBACK OF THE NIGHT BEFOREBEN sees KIRA sits on the sofa that she had previously done with AMY. However this time she is sitting with MADELEINE and sobs mercilessly on her shoulder. Then she stops and stands up defiantly and walks out of the room.
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INT. BED’S HOUSE. LOUNGE. FLASHBACK OF THE NIGHT BEFOREBEN sees EMILY and CAMERON standing in the doorway of the room flirting with each other. KIRA appears from the corridor. She walks over to CAMERON, grabs him and kneels in front of him, begging him for his attention.
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EXT. BED’S HOUSE. GARDEN. FLASHBACK OF THE NIGHT BEFOREBEN leans out of his bedroom window for a cigarette, as she goes to light his cigarette, he sees EMILY and CAMERON in the garden below. They intimately embrace. However KIRA runs out into the garden from inside the house and pushes them apart. EMILY stands back in horror as KIRA violently slaps CAMERON.
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INT. BED’S HOUSE. HALLWAY. FLASHBACK OF THE NIGHT BEFOREBEN sees CAMERON walk up the stairs with a bottle of alcohol in his hand. He stumbles drunkenly.
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INT. BED’S HOUSE. LOUNGE. FLASHBACK OF THE NIGHT BEFOREBEN looks wearily into a large mirror hanging on the living room’s wall. He rubs his face indicating that it has been a long night. KIRA bounds up behind him bright eyed and bushy tailed – a far cry from the state that she was in in the previous scene. This angers BEN. He turns around.
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BEN stares at KIRA, who looks fanatical.KIRA(Excited)Are you ready for your dance yet babe?BEN(Fustrated)Look, I told you before!KIRA(Frantic)What have I done?!
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INT. BED’S HOUSE. LOUNGE. FLASHBACK OF THE NIGHT BEFOREAMY sits spread out on the left side of the room against the wall. She is drinking. BEN sits on a bean bag opposite it and KIRA lays on the floor with her eyes closed in-between. BEN looks at AMY.BEN(Concerned)Do you think she’s ok?AMY turns to look at him.AMYWho cares!? She’s a dirty mess.Just as she finishes speaking AMY throws a cigarette packet at KIRA. This rouses KIRA and she opens her eyes.KIRA(Infuriated)Leave me alone, you dirty skank!!KIRA gets up and leaves.
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INT. BED’S HOUSE. LOUNGE. FLASHBACK OF THE NIGHT BEFOREBEN sees various people throughout his lounge feeling the effects of his party; EMILY passed out on the sofa on the left side of the room, a boy being sick into a bucket and on the other sofa loads of girls still drinking.
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INT. BED’S HOUSE. LOUNGE. FLASHBACK OF THE NIGHT BEFOREKIRA sits curled up in the corner of the room, sobbing and clutching a near empty bottle of vodka.
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INT. BED’S HOUSE. LOUNGE. FLASHBACK OF THE NIGHT BEFOREThe lights flicker on and off, and the room appears to spin to BEN as he sees everyone dancing to loud music.
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INT. BEN’S BEDROOM. BED’S HOUSE. MORNINGBEN sits on the edge of the bed; he stares forward, deep in thought. He hears loud footsteps coming towards him and then the bedroom door opening so he turns his head to see who it is.INT. BEN’S BEDROOM. BED’S HOUSE. MORNINGThe door handle slowly turns, and opens an inch.
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By Amy Meitiner, Group Director and Producer